When writing, minimalism is key. In this case I'm not talking about cutting scenes or slashing the word count.

Writers must not repeat themselves. For example, if you've just described a duel, there is no need for the squire to come back to his girlfriend and describe it word-for-word. Yes, this is what he might do in real life, but readers have just finished your previous account. We don't need to go through it all again.

Instead, sum up the squire's account, "He told her about while he lay with his head in her lap and she played with his hair," and add something more to the story by cutting straight the squire's reaction: "Sir Alain cutting Hedrick's arm off was the most horrible thing I've ever seen. I'm not sure I want to complete my training." Or, "I've never seen such brilliant swordsmanship! I hope Sir Alain picks me to be his squire."

If you want to switch things up, don't describe the duel. Instead, keep readers in suspense the way the girlfriend is kept in suspense as she's waiting for the squire to come home. Then the squire can describe the duel word-for-word without repetition.

Also, avoid lengthy descriptions of how people say things. "He uttered in a quavering little voice" is distracting to readers. Condense it. "He quavered" will do.

Shun adverbs such as "happily," "angrily," etc. For example: "I'm going home," Cartman said angrily. vs "Screw you guys, I'm going home," Cartman said.

By simply changing the dialogue a little, you can convey Cartman's anger. This takes a little more work than throwing adverbs around, but is well worth the effort because it is more realistic. Your readers will be less distracted by technicalities. Your writing will draw them into the story.

More is, of course, to come.