The Way the Crumble Cookies
(formerly Ranma and Akane Wake Up)
by W.Brad Robinson (Zorknot)
Prologue: Talking Heads
(taken from first section of ch.1 of previous 
version)

DISCLAIMER: Ranma and Akane are characters created 
originally by Rumiko Takahashi. I'm just going to 
screw with their minds a little.

NOTE: You don't necessarily have to read this to 
understand the fic. I almost considered cutting it 
out completely as the dreams are alittle long and are 
mainly psycho babble...but several people liked it 
and I like it to so I'm keeping Ranma's dream and 
adding Akane's, but I'm separating from the rest of 
the fic as a prologue. 

~~~~~[START of Prologue]~~~~~

Ranma tried hotter and hotter water but still nothing 
worked.

He was stuck as a girl.

Again.

"How many times does this have to happen?" Ranma 
demanded of the gods. "Why can't I just be left alone? 
I don't even care if the curse is cured anymore, but why 
do people have to mess with it?"

"It's your karma," an old, wise voice told her. "You 
have brought this on yourself, young one, and it is you 
alone who can undo it."

"Bullshit! I ain't done nothin' wrong!" 

"Who am I?" the old voice asked patiently.

"Who are you?! You're the ghoul, Shampoo's not-so-
great grandmother, Cologne."

"Idiot! If I am she, then who are you?"

"Huh? I'm Ranma Saotome of the Anything Goes School 
of Martial Arts."

"You are not your school, young one, or your name. 
Ranma Saotome is merely a metaphor, a way for you to deal 
with whatever affects you.  You use Ranma to hide 
yourself. You use Ranma to run away."

"I don't know what the hell your talking about, 
ghoul. Look, dya know how I can go back ta bein a man or 
are ya just gonna keep confusin the shit outta me?" 

"Are you a man?"

"Okay, look, If ya really wanna go on a soul 
searchin' party then fine. I'll admit it. Part of me is a 
girl. I accepted that after the wedding got ruined. But I'm 
still a man."

"What does that mean? You are not, after all, 
physically male at the moment, are you?"

"It MEANS that I ain't some weak-willed wishy-washy 
good for nothin cry baby."

"Yet you admit that part of you is like this."

"...yes."

"And you admitted this after the failed wedding?"

"Yeah..."

"Is Akane a man?"

"Of course not!"

"Do you not call her a tomboy at the slightest 
provocation?"

"Yeah but that's cause ...I'm just messin with her."

"Why do you do that?"

"Cause... she's just so cool...she don't let anyone 
get away with anythin, and she don't hurt anyone who 
can't take it. I love that about her. I love seein that...
Why am I tellin YOU this!"

"She's not 'wishy washy' then?"

"Nah, anythin' but! I mean, even Shampoo, Ukyo, and 
Kodachi, they got spunk, but they'll do anythin' I 
ask! It's irritatin."

"You want someone you can count on. Someone you can 
relax around and not worry about hurting, am I right?"

"Yeah."

"You want a man."

"Hold it right there! I never said..."

"I'm just using your definition. You said a man was 
someone who wasn't wishy-washy and who could be counted 
on to accomplish things."

"Look, I see what your sayin' but if that were true 
I'd be goin after Ryoga too, and I am NOT attracted to pig 
boy in the least."

"It's interesting that you should mention Ryoga, 
someone with whom you've flirted with quite forcefully in 
the past."

"That was just cause he was goin after Akane!"

"Perhaps. But he never could deny you anything while 
he thought you were female, am I right? He was 
weak...wishy-washy. He was a girl."

"I'll have to tell him that one sometime..."

"In fact, I would wager that the only people you are 
around for any significant amount of time who are men by 
your definition are the Tendo sisters, myself, and perhaps 
your mother. Everyone else has some weakness that makes them 
loose their willpower."

"But they're all girls!"

"And you love them all, don't you? They're your true 
family, the ones you go to if you're in need. Take me for 
instance. Why are you talking to me of all people, when you 
know that all I want is for you to marry Shampoo. Or Nabiki, 
you continually ask for her help even though she charges you 
an arm and a leg for it. And Kasumi will not tolerate 
bad behavior from you at all. She wields her caring, 
pleasant attitude like a great weapon that cuts you only when 
it's absent. These are all opponents you cannot truly defeat." 

"I can take ya anytime" Ranma said half heartedly.

"Yes, you could probably beat me, even without the 
cat fist now. But would it be a true victory?"

"No..." Ranma admitted. " Jeez! When did I start 
likin you?!"

"Happosai is another story, isn't he? Even though you 
have yet to defeat him in a clean fight, you have no respect 
for him. He is led by his emotions, his base desires. He is 
not a man. Every now and then your father actually comes close,
and that is why you have not left him even though you could have 
gone home or back to China at any time, but most of the time he 
is led by his stomach, his greed, and his fear of Happosai. 
When he gives into these feelings is when you hate him the 
most."

"Damn, how do you know all this stuff about me?"

"Think of Kuno. Do you know why you fight him even 
though he isn't anywhere near your level anymore? 
You're afraid of him. You're afraid of him because he 
doesn't give up. He is actually quite manly by your 
definition, and you are attracted to him."

"There ain't no way I'm attracted ta that jerk!"

"Sometimes I wonder if your double negatives are 
intentional... Do you remember the dream you had? The 
dream starts with you walking through the Tendo home. 
This is a metaphor for your exploration of the new world 
you entered. You go into the furo, a place of privacy and 
contemplation, and there sitting with you, is Kuno, naked, 
his intentions revealed. 

"Then you are submerged in the water, taken over by 
emotion, and the water changes from hot, meaning male, to 
cold, meaning female. You go from having something to 
attack and defend against to being helpless. You are then 
in the pool where Kuno groped you, where he revealed your 
femaleness, your helplessness, and strangely enough Kuno attempts 
to help you out. But he does this by extending his bokken, an 
obvious symbol of manhood. He offers to help you out of your 
emotional turmoil by giving you his manhood. By 
making you his girlfriend. But you refuse and are submerged once 
again sinking deeper and deeper into emotion, passing your 
father in his cursed form-a reminder of the cause of your 
curse. 

"This is the place where Ranma the girl lives. This 
is the place where you keep your fears... your doubts... 
your weaknesses. This place existed ever since the first 
time your father called you a girl because as soon as he 
did so, he provided you with a label to put all the feelings 
you didn't like under. A label you still use today. At the 
bottom of this place Kuno surrounds you, professing his love. 
You dare not move because to move would be to accept it. But 
you need to move. You need to get out of this dark emotional 
place you're in. The dream ends when you drown.

"If you were not attracted to Kuno at all, then you 
would not have had that dream. If you could not imagine being 
his wife you wouldn't have dreamt of having his children on 
watermelon island. And before you protest I ask you why when you 
were affected by Happosai's moxibustion making you weaker 
than a child you said, of all things 'the day Kuno beats me 
is the day I stop being a man?'"

"That don't mean nothin'!  I wouldn't date Kuno even 
if I were a woman!"

"There you go with the double negatives again.  But 
I'm proud of you. That's the first time you've referred to 
being female as being a 'woman' and not a 'girl.' And I think you 
have come upon the true name for what you have been calling 
manhood. It's maturity. 

"Kuno is by no means wishy-washy, but he is not 
your ideal. He gives no thought to his actions. He 
has no femininity. He is not 'woman' enough to be a true 
man. He is not mature. Akane still dislikes boys. She dislikes them 
for the same reason you don't like girls, because they aren't 
mature. 

"What you realized after the wedding is that while in 
many things you have reached a maturity beyond your years, 
in relationships you have yet to grow.  That you felt 
that you had to be female for this to happen is regrettable, 
because it's put you in your current situation."

"What?"

"I think you are a man, but you are also a girl. What 
you need to do is become a woman."

"What the hell are ya talkin about?"

"You need to accept your weaknesses and grow beyond 
them. You've plowed through your life all this time, 
now you must plant some seeds."

"Huh?"

"Tell me who I am."

"You are Cologne, we already went through this!"

"Heh, not the old ghoul anymore?"

"No..."

"You do realize you are dreaming right?"

"I'm dreaming?" 

"I thought it was obvious... I ask you once more: Who 
am I?"

"If I'm dreamin then...you're not really here. But 
then why am I talkin to you? How did ya know the dream 
about Kuno? How come I could talk to ya about Akane? 
You're not Cologne, you're..."

"Yes, you know it now, say it."

"You're me. You're that part of me that is a woman, 
that knows what I am feeling, that is patient, that 
works things out."

"I am what makes you a man. I am your wisdom, your 
experience. I am the reason you excel in martial 
arts."

"Yes."

"Yes."

~~~~~*~~~~~

Akane screamed louder and louder but still Ranma 
would not respond.

She was stuck as a doll

Again

"Why? Why does this always happen to me?! Why can't 
people just leave me alone? I have enough problems as 
it is" Akane yelled at the gods,

Ranma crouched down to her and said, "It's your 
karma, Akane. Ya brought this on yourself."

"You...you can hear me?"

"Yeah.... But can ya hear yourself?"

"Huh? What's THAT supposed to mean?"

"Who am I, Akane?"

"Honestly! You're Ranma, my fiance and a stupid jerk 
for making me think you couldn't hear me."

"Dummy. If I'm that guy than who are you?"

"I'm Akane Tendo, of the Tendo school of Anything 
Goes Martial arts."

"You ain't your name or your school. You're just 
usin' those things as an excuse ta act like a spoiled 
brat."

"You JERK! I thought you were going to help me not 
insult me! Are you going to find a way to return me 
to normal or not?"

"What is normal, Akane?"

"Normal is being human... not some stupid little 
china doll!"

"You wanna go back to bein a tomboy?"

"Yes...No! I'm not a tomboy! I'm just a normal girl!"

"I wouldn't call ya normal..."

"Alright! So maybe I'm not like other girls. Big 
deal!"

"...."

"You don't sound like Ranma..."

" Ooh, she's beginnin' ta catch on! Look, what is it 
about bein a doll that ya don't like anyway?"

"Everything! I'm small, I can't move the way I want 
to, I can't communicate what I want to any one...I 
can't talk to you.... I can't do anything! I have to 
depend on other people to save me if I fall or 
something falls on me...I hate it!"

"Heh, sounds like your 'normal' life...well everythin 
'cept the 'small' part."

"I wish I were full size now so I could hit you with 
a hammer...but...but you're right. I can't do 
anything, I can't swim, I can't cook, I can't write 
well. I can't even do martial arts as well as 
everybody else. What good am I to anybody? What good 
am I to you?"

"Feh, why should ya care about me?"

"Because, you baka, I love you! I didn't realize it 
till the wedding but...I want to spend the rest of my 
life with you!"

"Ya got a funny way of showin it."

"Well so do you!"

"Hey, ya know that's right! I'm a complete jerk to ya 
all the time. I deserved all those beatins! You 
should just find somebody else. Maybe Ryoga. He's a 
nice guy..."

"You're NOT Ranma, are you? Ryoga...he's nice, 
but...he's too nice."

"What's that Akane? I couldn't hear ya could ya speak 
up?"

"I said he's too nice. Every other boy I know that 
isn't already with somebody is like that. Or they 
start stalking me, or trying to defeat me. But 
you...Ranma I mean...he was the first one that was 
ever truly mean to me."

"Oooh, I see now why ya fell in love with him!"

"Shut up! You don't understand. Ranma was the first 
one that was ever honest. No, I guess he's not that. 
He pretends like he doesn't like me but...well I know 
he does. And everytime he insults me...I don't know 
whether I want to kill him...or kiss him."

"Even when he's a girl?"

"...."

 "Heh, while yer thinkin 'bout that let me take ya 
down the old memory lane. Tofu knocked out Ranma's 
legs with a shiatsu point. What'd you do?"

"I carried him home. What's the point?"

"You carried HER home. Ranma's girl body is lighter 
than his male body but it still weighs a good bit 
don't it?"

"I guess."

"But you enjoyed it didn't you?"

"NO!"

"Oh come on, her body pressed against your back her 
breasts bouncin', her arms around you..."

"She was so vulnerable then...I..."

"HAH! You liked it!  Tell me, what happened during 
Ranma's fight with Ryoga?"

"Ryoga found out about the curse...my hair got 
cut..."

"Ranma rescued ya from Ryoga's bandannas and took you 
up to the limb of a tree. She was a girl. What 
happened."

"Ryoga cut the tree down with his belt..."

"Oh come on...you and Ranma were on the limb of that 
tree. You were REAL close. And you thought 'I could 
kiss her now...' and then you realized what you were 
thinking and scooted away, embarassed."

"How could you know what I was thinking?"

"I'm just cool like that I guess."

"But I'm not like that! I had a crush on Tofu!"

"Yeah you had a real big crush on him didn't ya? A 
big crush that evaperated like spit in the fryin pan 
soon as ya got yer hair cut and had a short cry. Ya 
know what I think? I think you really DID hate boys, 
and when Ranma Saotome came along you were in luck, 
cause he was half girl."

"That's rediculous!"

"Is it? Then I guess you never fantasized about doin 
it with Ranma as a girl? You never stared at her 
breasts? You were so angry that Ranma was runnin' 
around topless...I wonder why?"

"OKAY! Okay...I admit it. I think Ranma 
is...attractive as a girl."

"Right and also Shampoo, Ukyo, Kodachi, 
Natsume...Nodoka."

"Hey that's not fair! This is about Ranma!"

"No Akane, it ain't. Ya get so mad at Ranma. I think 
ya oughta know why."

"I KNOW why already!"

"Then tell me."

"He makes me feel so stupid and clumsy! I mean he can 
do everything and he does it so easily."

"Your jealous of him."

"A little...yes."

"A lot. All your life ya wanted for yourself what 
Ranma's already got."

"Well, I do wish I could have gone on a few more 
training trips, I'd love to see China again, I'd like 
to be able to swim..."

"You'd also like to be able to change sexes, to have 
other girls hangin all over ya..."

"I'm not that bad! "

"No you ain't.  But who do ya hit, Akane? Ranma, or 
Shampoo? Ranma or Ukyo? Ranma or Kodachi?"

"I'm just a normal girl! I'm not all these things you 
say I am! I find some girls attractive, that doesn't 
mean I'm a lesbian!"

"There ain't no such thing as normal, Akane. You 
ain't weird or nothin, if that's what your afraid of. 
Your special. However much you try ta make yourself 
think you're not, you are. And you like yourself the 
most when you believe that. You ain't a lesbian. You 
like guys too. But ya can't keep hidin' those other 
feelins away. Ranma needs ta know about em."

"'Special'...you make it sound like I'm retarded..."

"Heh, nah...you're far from it. You are Ranma's 
equal."

"Honestly, I'm nowhere near Ranma..."

"You are. You smiled when I said that. I saw it. You 
may not believe me now. But you'll learn. You'll be a 
lot happier once ya do. Its your lack of self-
confidence that makes ya so clumsy. You want ta learn 
so badly, and that's good, but ya think that if ya 
gotta do that, ya must be some kinda invalid, some 
kinda china doll which can't do nothin. Which is 
kinda why you're in the pickle you're in now."

"Who are you? You're not Ranma, you don't sound like 
anyone else I know..."

"You do know yer dreamin' dontcha?"

"I'm dreaming?"

"Dummy."

"But...if I'm dreaming...and you seem to know my 
feelings..."

"Yeah?"

"You have to be...but that's impossible."

"Of course it is. That don't change it though."

"Then...you're really...me?"

"Yep!"

"You're the part of me that wants to be like Ranma, 
the part of me that wants...to be a man."

"I'm the part of you that believes in yourself, the 
part of you that gives you confidence, I'm the part 
of you that makes you a woman, instead of some stupid 
china doll."

"Yes"

"Yes"


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Ranma woke up. 

Looking at the ceiling, he saw that he 
was in his room. He smiled. He was male. He got out 
of his 
futon and stepped out of his room. He padded down the 
upstairs hallway, the wood floor cool against his 
bare feet. He came to Akane's door. He paused just a 
moment before he opened it. He approached Akane's bed 
and leaned over her sleeping form. "Akane?"

Akane woke up.

Her eyes fluttered open and she became aware of 
someone leaning over her. Somehow she was not afraid. 
The light from a street lamp shown through her window 
and spilled on a kind and loving face. "Ranma?" She 
asked, not believing.

"I love you." Ranma said. After all this time of not 
being able to say it, now it was the only thing he 
could think of saying.

Akane reached up and touched Ranma's face. 
"You're...real." 
She pulled him down and they kissed. It was like the 
mixing of 
two reactive chemicals, creating an explosion of 
passion. When 
they stopped Akane and Ranma embraced each other, 
their 
chins over each others shoulder. Akane whispered into 
Ranma's ear playfully  "I love you more."

"We'll see about that." Ranma whispered back, 
smiling. He 
never could back down from a challenge...

~~~~~~[END of Prologue]~~~~~

I would like to thank Harold Ancell, for his 
criticism of the 'talking heads' nature of the dreams 
and Thermopyle, for catching a slew of grammatical 
errors and pointing out a few inconsistancies with 
the whole man/woman definition thing. 

C&C still welcome and very much appreciated


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